It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
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TN
27 tháng 8 2021
In the modern days, the accomodation affects us very much so choosing a properly place to live is an important thing to do.
Everyone will consider living in the city or in the countryside but if we take a closer look , we will see the advantages and disadvantages of each. For examples, the city may convenient but the countryside is more green and beautiful than the city. If the children who live in city, they may be successful but their health is not. Otherwise, the children who live in the countryside may not approach to high techonology and modern studying methods but their minds aren't under pressure of studying too much. In short, every place has each advantages and disadvantages but I think living in the city will be good for children
DP
12 tháng 11 2020
Growing up in the countryside is better for children than in a big city. For this reason, I agree:
First, it has fresher air than a big city. After the stressful lessons children will feel more relaxed. They're not only delighted in the rice fields too. Second, the cost of living is very cheap in the countryside. So, people in the city often come here for the summer vacation to rent or buy to stay.
Thirst of all, the countryside environment is much cleaner than the town itself. For example, in the countryside there are fewer means of transportation than the city, environmental pollution in the city is a societal hot issue.
S
17 tháng 12 2016
Some people think that it’s better for their children to grow up in the countryside; other people think that it’s better their children to grow up in a big city. Both possibilities have some advantages and disadvantages. I’ll give advantages of each approach and I’ll argue in favor of this that it’s better for children to grow up in the countryside.
In a society where money, career and convenience are important things, many people prefer to live in big cities. Consequently their children grow up there. In the following passage I’ll state some important aspects of the life in the big cities. People go to live there at many reasons. First, a big city provides many opportunities for career and education. For instance, If I live in South Dakota I’ll have chance to live in connection with nature but there are few universities and work positions. However if I live in New York I’ll have opportunity to choose between hundreds of universities and thousands free work positions. This connection If our children grow up in a big city, they will have chance to study in prestige school. Besides, they will be prepared for the life with strong competition.
However we know that the life in a big city has some disadvantages. For instance, stress is problem number one in a big city. That is why many people think that it’s better for their children to grow up in the countryside. The life there has many advantages. First, children, which grow up in the countryside, have chance to live with connection with nature. In most cases there are more calmly and they seldom suffer from psychical diseases in contrast with children which grow in a big city. The life in the countryside is not so dynamic than life in the big city. In the countryside there are few changes. For example, children often spend their childhood in one house, they study in one school, and their parents rarely change their work positions, which reflect negative on the children. To sum up, the life in the countryside is related to few problems than this in a big city.
In conclusion, I think that it’s better for children to grow up in the countryside. That is why, the first thing that we must save is health of our children.
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CTVVIP
18 tháng 10 2021
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1. Some people say that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in the city.
2. Is living in the country much healthier than living in the city?
3. People enjoy living in the villages because the air is fresh and clean.
4. We helped the farmers load the rice onto buffalo drawn carts.
5. Life in the countryside has changed a lot over the past ten years.
6. In the countryside children play more freely than in the city.
7. Nomadic children learn to ride a horse when they are small.
8. Unlike many others jobs, formers depend heavily on the weather.
Nowadays, we live in the tall buildings in the urban area. In contrast, in the past, people lived in the countryside. Do you think that children living in the countryside is better than living in the urban area? In this essay, I will argue that the benefit of children living in the countryside outweighs living in the tall building in the urban area.
The air in countryside is fresher than in the urban area. Many people there do not have cars, so the noise and air pollution does not exist in the countryside, but in the urban area, it is serious. As a result, it is especially good for children to grow up because the fresh air will not create a lot of respiratory problems, such as, asthma. Fresh air can also make their brains become fresh because their sight is not blocked by the tall buildings. People living there see the green trees, grasses and colourful flowers which will make them happy. They will not have shortsightedness.
The environment in countryside is also very quieter than in the urban area. Since there are not too many cars and children there do not like to watch TV, it is very quiet there. At the daytime, children may go to school while in the evening, they may chat with their neighbours and play chess. They sleep at around 7pm. Their living is very simple but happy life.
Children are simple and friendly. They are fostered to take care of one another, so neighbours have a close relationship. The population density of living in the urban area is much higher than that in the countryside, however, neighbours do not have a close relationship. They only care about themselves but not other people. Children living in the countryside want to have a simple life ; they only want things that are natural, not luxurious .
All in all, I think that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in the urban area, so that they will know the importance of caring other people. They should not be materialistic . They can have a happy childhood.
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