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Write a letter to your friend telling her what you like most about your school.
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21 tháng 4 2020
Bạn tham khảo nhé !!!
Hello everyone, my name is Yen. I am twelve years old. I am from Ngoc Thanh Village, Kim Dong district, Hung Yen province. Today, I am very happy to tell you about my school. My school is Le Quy Don. It is in Luong Bang town, Kim Dong district, Hung Yen province. It is very beautiful and big. There are twelve classrooms and eight function rooms in my shool. My school has five hundred and twenty-five students and thirty-two teachers. Students in my school are very good. They come from around Kim Dong district. Our teachers teach very well. At school, I learn many subject such as : Math, Literature, English, Art, Music,...In Math lessons, I learn how to count. In English classes, I learn how to speak English. In Music lessons, I sing songs. In Art classes, I draw pictures. So on...In all subject, I English best because it's very interesting and important for me. At breaks, I have a lots activities : skipping rope, hiding and seeking, chatting with friends, so on...Each day at school is a happy day. I love my school very much.
21 tháng 4 2020
Dear Sam,
How are you? And now, I'll tell you about my school.
My school is in the city but it is very peaceful. In front of the school gate are rows of Indian almond and almond trees. Under the big eagles is a small grocery store, we buy food there every day because the food there is delicious. We go to school by bike or on foot. My school is Quang Thang primary school. It has about 25 teachers and 361 students. The teachers and students are very kind. Teachers' lectures are very good and helpful and students are personal, hard-working and docile. My school has all 9 classes, a board room, an executive room, a traditional room - usually the venue for weekend activities, computer room, chemistry room and physical room. They are arranged in a U shape. In front of each row of classrooms, there is a beautiful and colorful flowerbed. Every day, we watered and looked after it well. Anh and I are a close couple. Anh is hardworking - kind, decent and studies well. At school, I most extracurricular activities. All members of the school are involved. I experienced a lot of games with you and I thought it was funny and helpful. Thank you for reading my letter. How about you? Let me know in your next letter.
Dịch:
Sam thân mên,
Bạn khỏe không? Và bây giờ, tôi sẽ kể cho bạn về trường của tôi.
Trường tôi ở thành phố nhưng nó rất yên bình. Trước cổng trường là những hàng cây bàng,cây phượng đã nhiều tuổi. Dưới những cây bàng lớn là một cửa hàng tạp hóa nhỏ, chúng tôi thường mua thức ăn ở đó hàng ngày vì thức ăn ở đó rất ngon. Chúng tôi đến trường bằng xe đạp hoặc đi bộ. Trường tôi là trường tiểu học Quảng Thắng. Nó có khoảng 25 giáo viên và 361 học sinh. Các giáo viên và học sinh rất tử tế. Các bài giảng của giáo viên rất hay và hữu ích và các sinh viên thì cá tính, chăm chỉ và ngoan ngoãn. Trường tôi có tất cả 9 lớp, một phòng hội đồng, một phòng điều hành, một phòng truyền thống - thường là nơi tổ chức các hoạt động cuối tuần, phòng máy tính, phòng hóa học ang phòng vật lý. Chúng được sắp xếp theo hình chữ U. Phía trước mỗi dãy lớp có một bồn hoa xinh đẹp và đầy màu sắc. Mỗi ngày, chúng tôi tưới nước và chăm sóc nó tốt. Ánh và tôi là một đôi bạn thân. Ánh chăm chỉ - làm việc, tử tế và học tập khá tốt. Ở trường, tôi thích hầu hết các hoạt động ngoại khóa. Tất cả các thành viên của trường đều tham gia. Tôi đã trải nghiệm rất nhiều trò chơi cùng các bạn và tôi nghĩ nó thật hài hước và hữu ích. Cảm ơn bạn đã đọc thư của tôi. Thế còn bạn? Hãy cho tôi biết trong lá thư tiếp theo của bạn nhé.
P/s:Em thay đổi số hs và số gv nhé!
27 tháng 1 2022
Dear Lien Ai,
I'm in the second day of my dream holiday in Dalat. Cool climate, rich natural and human resources, this is truly a dream city. I am currently staying at a hotel. I visited Tran Le Xuan Palace, Truc Lam Zen Monastery, Hang Nga Villa or XQ Su Quan, the campus of Da Lat Railway Station, attractive tourist attractions. And I also participate in the Da Lat flower festival, where hundreds of different flowers are displayed. I am very happy and content right now, because I get to visit such a wonderful place.
See you soon,
Your best friend,
sacred
1 tháng 2 2017
Đề 1 :
Hi ! I'm a student in grade 6 of Le hong phong secondary school . It't located on PNL street .It's small but it's beautiful and clean with some big trees in the schoolyard .
There are about 750 students in my school . We wear uniform everyday. At school we have a lot of subject such as : Maths , Literature , English , History , Music , etc . My favourite subject is English . At break time , I often play football or read comics. After school , I help my parents do the housework . I love my school so much .
Đề 3 :
To : tom@supertall . com
Dear Tom ,
I feel very excited . My Tet holiday is coming . This year I will help my parents decorate the
house . My mother and I will go to flower market to buy a peach blossom . But we don't buy
firework and banh chung , We will cook it in a very big pot .
At Tet , people should visit relatives , go to pagodas, eat special foods and much more. Every year I always do it . And people shouldn't break things , play cards all night and fight.
It's about my Tet . What about you ? Please write to me soon , OK ?
Best wishes
Huy
1 tháng 3 2020
Dear Mary,
I'm fine. And you? I'm very glad writing letter to you. I will tell you about one of my most memorable past experiences. Last month, my mother told me to bring a raincoat before I went to school but I did not obey. When I went home, suddenly it rained. It rained more and more heavily. I decided to go home in rain without raincoat. That night, I'm seriously ill. I was pity when seeing my parents looked after me and worry about me.
I hope you won't do it as me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your friend,
1 tháng 3 2020
Dear Jenny,
Last night I had a scary dream. I was walking along an empty street late at night. Suddenly a lion appeared at the end of the street. He ran toward me with his big mouth open and sharp teeth. He roared and jumped upon me. I screamed loudly and awoke. I'm still frightened now. By the way, how have similar problems now. Write to me as soon as possible.
Your friend,
Son
JS
1 tháng 3 2020
Tham khảo:
Dear Mary,
I'm fine. And you? I'm very glad writing letter to you. I will tell you about one of my most memorable past experiences. Last month, my mother told me to bring a raincoat before I went to school but I did not obey. When I went home, suddenly it rained. It rained more and more heavily. I decided to go home in rain without raincoat. That night, I'm seriously ill. I was pity when seeing my parents looked after me and worry about me.
I hope you won't do it as me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your friend,
Mai
AL
3 tháng 5 2021
Dear Lien Ai,
I'm so glad that I can write this letter for you, so today, I willtell you some activities I have done to protect the environment.
I am a volunteer ,so i have done many things or the community service. I planted trees and beautiful flowers in the school yard. It was so great. I collected the rubbish on the beach and in the sea then I recycled them. It helps protect the environment a lot. And I, together with my friends, cleaned the street the street and lake. And I think I will also collect broken glass, can in the park, ‘cause people always throw them indiscriminately.And I prevented people prom cutting down trees, and I asked everyone to grow the forests.These are the things I have done, I think I will do more in the future.
Looking forward to seeing you
Cheers,
Linh
I'm very happy that to tell you....
sau that là 1 mệnh đề => câu của bạn sai => sửa lại là "I'm very happy to tell you..."
câu mở đầu của bạn hơi gượng, bạn nên bỏ "somethings I like" thì đọc dễ hơn và dịch cũng dễ hơn.
with cotton basins filled (ý của bạn là gì ?, từ này có nữa sao :v)
I like canteen so much => nên chuyển thành I like the canteen (of my school) very much.
"or somethings" => "many things else"
Especial => Specially.
"help us good" => dùng từ "good" sai, mình có luôn nhận xét rằng từ "help us good....đến knowledge" bạn sử dụng chưa chính xác.
"So i really all" => thiếu động từ trong câu.
Yupp, that's all, bạn có thể tham khảo và chỉnh sửa lại bài viết, sau đó bạn post lên forum, tag tên mình or nhiều bạn chuyên Anh khác check cho lại nhé.
Chúc bạn học tốt.