1. It was only when I left home that I realised how much my father meant to me
Not until.
2. My father find maps hard to follow
My father has.
3. Customs officals are stopping more travellers than usual this week
An increased.
4. I dislike it when people criticise me unfairly
I object.
5. He speaks more persuasively than his brother
He is a
6. He never suspected that money had been stolen
At no time.
7.Their teacher is making them study hard
They are..
8. We left quietly, so that we wouldn't disturb the children
So as
9. This will be the orchestra's first performance outside London
This will be the first time.
10. The chances are that the whole thing'll have been forgotten by next term
In all.
1. It was only when I left home that I realised how much my father meant to me
Not until I left home did I realize how much my family meant to me.
2. My father find maps hard to follow
My father has difficulty in following the map.
3. Customs officals are stopping more travellers than usual this week
An increased(increasing????) number of travellers are being stopped by customs officials this week.
4. I dislike it when people criticise me unfairly
I object to being criticised unfairly.
5. He speaks more persuasively than his brother
He is a more persuasive speaker than his brother.
6. He never suspected that money had been stolen
At no time did he suspect that the money bad been stolen.
7.Their teacher is making them study hard
They are being made to study hard.
8. We left quietly, so that we wouldn't disturb the children
So as not to disturb the children, we left quietly
9. This will be the orchestra's first performance outside London
This will be the first time the orchestra has performed outside London
10. The chances are that the whole thing'll have been forgotten by next term
In all probability the whole thing will have been forgotten by next term.