Hãy nhập câu hỏi của bạn vào đây, nếu là tài khoản VIP, bạn sẽ được ưu tiên trả lời.
If I were the Minister of Education, at first I would rise the teachers' salaries. I think that it is the most important problem nowadays, because of that fewer and fewer people want to work in this profession. So, I think, if the salaries grows up, there will be more teachers and the educational level will be higher. Also I would to put more free extra lessons to help those students, who doesn't undersend the matherial during the lesson or who want to have higher results in the exams. And probably I would correct the law about school uniform and make it not so strict. I think, it will make our education a bit bettter.
trả lời
If I were the Minister of Education, I would raise teachers` salary. If the salary was risen, the teachers wouldn`t have to work so much. If the teachers didn`t have to work a lot, they would be able to prepare better for the classes. This would lead to a better education.
hc tốt
Topic 3:
As we know, The Internet has many benefits and importance in the present time. It’s clear
that the Internet has become part of our daily life. Because:
Firstly,The Internet is a very fast and convinient way for us to communicate with others. Such
as, We can communicate with our friends and relatives by means of email or chatting.
Secondly, the Internet is a very fast and convinient way for us to get information. For
examples,We can get latest news of the world, check weather or book the tickets for a soccer
match or the flight, and so on.
Thirdly, The Internet is a big source of entertaiment: We can see movies, listen to music , read
newspapers . We can play games or do sight seeing, and so on.
Finally, Internet is a rich source educational materials: We can learn English, look up new
words in a dictionary, take a learning course, and so on.
On the other hand, the Internet has limistations. It is time - consuming and costly. It is also
dangerous because of virus and bad programs. On the other hand, The Internet users sometimes
have to suffer various risks such as spam or electronic junk mail, and personal information
leaking.
In conclusion, the Internet is very useful for us. However, we shouldn’t spend too much time
for it. We should balance study and surf the web.
Refer
My favourite leisure activity is reading. I like reading because it is a hobby that is useful and interesting: it's useful because you can find a lot of knowledge of all areas that you need; it's interesting because the books can give you the joy and help you relax after a day of toil, etc... Especially, when you join in the forum, you can meet a lot of people who have interests similar to yours, comment on the books or novels that interest you. I love books and also natural as reading books. When I was ten , I was awarded "The Scarlet Sails" of Alexandre Green by my grandfather. It is the first book that I have been. I read it many times. Up to now, I still love it and occasionally read it again. My love for books begun. I usually spend almost of free time choosing book with my friends, participate in dicussion on the forum and reading . Every weekend and all holidays when I have no work to do, I often read books and ruminate on it. I also help some friends select the genres of books that they like. I always hope that I will have my own library in my future. I love books very much and perhaps, I couldn't live without them.
Vietnam
Sunday, February 25th 2018
Dear Stephen,
I know your country is very far from mine - Vietnam. But if you have a chance, I want to come and visit it - a very beautiful country.
I will show you my village first, its name is Sky Garden. Listening to the name can make you know what there is in my village. Each house in Sky Garden has an own garden, it's probably a banana garden, an apple garden, a flower garden and so on. My village also has a paddy field, it seems be a very huge yellow rug. And if you feel hot, you can go with me to the Red River and enjoy the cool winds.
I really want you to visit my village and my country. I hope you will have time for that.
Write to me as soon as you receive this letter.
Reguars,
Doi ve co ban la buon... cuoi!!!
Nowadays, many companies encourage old employees to retire to make up room for the young ones. The above point is certainly true; this essay will contain some reasons that support my suggestion.
First of all, the new generation has multiple advantages that outweigh the old generation, because the world we live in currently is based on the fast, frequently-generated technology. The new generation is more adapted to become updated with the modern releases of it. They master advanced technology and have greater energy to exploit than senior employees due to many aspects including the physical strength of each party. Plus they are more capable of rejuvenating their concepts as they are gaining experience. Moreover, young employees would have the opportunity, just like the older ones had theirs once in the past, to show off their skills to their boss. Eventually, by allowing younger employee to become more involved in a beneficial way in their community, the spread of corruption would decrease gradually. As a result, the society will witness a great deal of sustainable economical production in the country.
Undeniably, old employees must have left an influential impact on today's trade. And their achievements that had been accomplished in the workforce force should be appreciated after they retire. Therefore, responsible organizations should work on arranging educational centres and beneficial events for the retired senior citizens. They would fulfill their free time usefully and efficiently, like pursuing in their personal hobbies.
At last, our community is based on a mixture of various age parties. For each period of time, each party obtains heir right to possess an effective role in the society. However, commercial and big companies prefer young employee because they infuse the work atmosphere with lots of young blood.
_Because we don't know what the future will be tomorrow, so the life is much more interesting._
Câu hỏi của bạn rất hay, nhưng nếu 3 thứ bạn muốn làm trước khi ngày cuối cùng của bạn xảy ra, thì có thể viết liền thành 1 đoạn văn ?
Mình nghĩ rằng nên viết một bài văn, và thêm những điều thực sự cần thiết quan trọng (như đi du lịch, ăn món ăn chưa bao giờ được ăn, đi gặp người quan trọng mà chưa bao giờ được gặp,...) thì những kiểu như thế này thì bài văn (essay) có thể diễn tả tốt hơn là đoạn văn (paragraph) khi diễn tả 1 lần 3 điều.
Hi, I am very pleased to receive your letter.
We will arrive at 8 am tomorrow. The animals I want to see a lot, for example: monkeys, elephants, squirrels, mink,..We can go eat and visit the zoo.
Write soon! ,.....( tên người viết)
Fame seems to appeal to everyone due to its attraction and glamour. Many prefer to be a famous one or a celebrity to change their life. However, everything has its both side. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of fame.
To begin with, they get a special treatment everywhere they go. Celebrities get special tables at restaurants, best sit at theatres and VIP treatment at clubs or events. They get free parking at hotels or they cars are guarded at events.
On the other hand, celebrities have no private, that make they are constantly judged. They are judged for the clothes they wear, their bodies, make-up, personalities and cars that they drive. Newspapers, magazines, blogs and social networks you can always find the rude, nasty, insulting, and derogatory and lies about celebrity’s daily routine. It’s like we forget that they’re human beings.
Fame carries also worry about your own safety and the safety of your family. There is always a danger that a crazy fan may try to kidnap or kill you or your children, so it is necessary to employ bodyguards.
All in all, fame may be nice but not an easy thing to live with. You have money but you do not feel safe, you have friends and fans but you can never be sure if they like you for who you are or for your money.
Mọi người sửa giúp em bài này ạ! Em cảm ơn mọi người nhiều <3
Write an essay between 100-150 words: What are the advantages and disadvantages of being famous?
Fame seems to appeal to everyone due to its attraction and glamour. Many prefer to be a famous one or a celebrity to change their life. However, everything has its both side -> two sides : pros and cons. ( Bn muốn nhấn mạnh ở pros and cons thì nên nói rõ 2 mặt chứ both: cả, nó ko có nghĩa là 2 mặt ). This essay will discuss the pros and cons of fame.-> Câu này phải bỏ vì đây là văn viết chứ ko phải văn nói.
To begin with, they get a special treatment everywhere they go. Bổ sung thêm trong câu này luôn nha : They can also get good medical care ỏ excellent entertainment. For example, we can treated by well-qualified doctors n high qualify hospitals. Celebrities get special tables at restaurants, best sit at theatres-> theaters and VIP treatment at clubs or events. They get free parking at hotels or they cars are guarded at events. -> Ko đc hợp lí nên bỏ bớt đi.
* Thức ra đã nói đến advantages và disavantages của being famous thì bn phải liệt kê đủ tức là bn nói 3 pros thì cx khoảng 3-4 cons chứ ko đc 1 pros mà 3-4 cons đc.Nếu như thế nó gọi là kết cấu chưa phù hợp.
-----> Trâm sẽ liệt kê một số pros nữa nha:
* Nevertheless, The most obvious advantages of being famous is the fact that it's very easy to earn money so they can purchase things. They can enjoy their life and have a good conditions like a large house with garden, big living room, large and big bedroom,.. with a lot of ne modern technologies..... etc.
* Moreover, it's interesting to appear on TV or magazines and be admitted by lots of people.
------ Chú ý sử dụng đa dạng từ và từ nối.
On the other hand, celebrities have no private-> private life -> như thế mói biểu thị rõ ý nghĩa, that make they are constantly-> frequently judged. They are judged for the clothes they wear, their bodies, make-up, personalities and cars that they drive. In Newspapers, magazines, blogs and social networks, you can always find the rude, nasty, insulting, and derogatory and-> or lies about celebrity’s daily routine. It’s like we forget that they’re human beings.-> nên bỏ đi.
Fame carries-> The famous also worry about your->their own safety and the safety of your-> their family. There is always a danger that a crazy fans or anti-fans may try to kidnap or kill you or your children, so it is necessary to employ bodyguards.
All in all, fame may be nice but not an easy thing to live with. You have money but you do not feel safe, you have friends and fans but you can never be sure if they like you for who you are or for your money.
* Kết bài khá độc đáo tuy nhiên ở ngay sau câu đầu tiên bn có thể nói lên suy nghĩ của mình ví dụ như : I'm in favor of having a normal life than being famous. As you have money.....
-----------> Trên đây là suy nghĩ là góp ý của Trân về bài viết của bn.