
I have a lot of acquaintances,but my closest relationship is the friendship between Loan and I. We have been friends since we were very young and now,we are in the same class.Loan is quite fat and short.She has a short black hair,a straight nose and a large forehead.Her fashion style is very comfortable.She often wear T-shirts and jeans . Her appearance looks so simple and "provincial" , but you will be impressed deeply when you communicate with her.She is really humorous,easy-going and intelligent.She is also helpful,a reason why all people've ever known her love her a lot.But,what I love her most is her sincerity.She makes friends with me,loves me and cares about me unconditionally.Whenever I feel low or depressed,she will stand by my side and cheer my up .Even in some case,she voluntarily fights for me if I'm not confident enough.I can't imagine what my life would be without her.I always hope for a long-lasting rewarding friendship between us and give her the best wishes.
Everyone has their closed friends to share happiness and sadness.So am I.My closest friend is Dung.He is quite a intelligence boy,ease-going,and especially homourous.Thanks to his nice appearance,he has bring a lot of fun to everyone around him not except me.Besides,Dung is also a optimistic boy,he always smile on his face even in most difficult situations.Morever,he learns very well,he is usually on the top of my school,he has now helped many weak friends to be better in their learning.Not only does Dung a excellent student,but he also is a good son in the family.Dung often help his family with housechores and even earn more money by doing half time of jobs.Although he is busy all time,he try to spend as much time as possible sharing happy or sad things with me.As for me,i really happy to be friend with such a wonderful person like Dung.I hope our friendship will be forever.
1. Intelligent (not intelligence)
2. An optimistic (not a optimistic)
3. He always smiles (not he always smile)
4. Has been helped ... now (not has now)
5. In their studies (not their learning)
6. Not only is Dung a excellent ... (not Does)
7. he is also a good (no he also is )
8. Dung often helps (not often help)
9. Chores được hiểu là việc nhà rồi nên không viết là housechores
10. He tries (not he try)
11. I'm really happy (not I really happy)
12. I hope that our ... (not I hope our...)