[Writing 9-3]

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9 tháng 3 2021

I agree that life skills should be taught to young people at school along with traditional subjects like math and science.

First of all, we need to know what life skills are? Life skills are actions derived from things that people have been learned to respond effectively to situations or interact appropriately with those around them. So it is a very essential thing for life. For example, if we are injured, the life skill is to help us know how to bandage the wound or when there is a fire or an earthquake, it helps us to know how to escape. If we don't learn life skills, then we will have rude behavior in public places, from not knowing how to give room to the elderly to jostling each other when shopping, etc. Survival skills are the attitudes that manifest every day in life, it will be very difficult if we do not apply it on a regular basis to become good habits. But on the contrary, if we care and express ourselves in every situation, from greetings, dear ... to learning how to organize learning, playing and doing a good thing every day then everything will become simple, natural.

First of all, you should appreciate yourself, know how to equip yourself with skills to protect yourself. Then know how to respect the rules of society and take care of others. Just every day you do a good thing and do a good deed, even though simple and small, you will gradually equip yourself with skills in a safe and happy life!

9 tháng 3 2021

We all know that life skills are very important, and my parents usually say that they are even more important than traditional subjects, such as maths, science, ... And in real life, there are many opinions about what things are more necessary. Therefore, I highly agree with this statement. And here are some reasons.

Firstly, life skills are really vital for all children, even after they graduate. Here are some of my definitions of life skills. From my point of view, any skill that is useful for one's life, such as tidying the room, cleaning the house, using a computer, etc..., can be a life skill. So, life skills are very important for each person's life. And if children study about life skills, after graduating school, they can be self-confident and they will successfully deal with every changes and challenges.

Secondly, with life skills, children can determine their life. As I have noted, small but necessary skills can be life skills, so if children don't know any skills or they can only do simple things, their living capital can be limited, so they must always have someone to help them. I think this is not really reasonable, because it means that children always depend on someone, and their lives will be very mechanical - they can't do what they want themselves.

In short, although traditional subjects provide children a large amount of knowledge, life skills must be taught together with those subjects. So, totally agree with the statement!

     I do not agree on computer learning. Although learning on computers, although helping learners to be more flexible in the fields of technology and creativity, there are still many negative aspects, not meeting the learning needs of students:

     First, the quality of learning via the Internet cannot be compared with the traditional way of learning - which creates better interaction between students and teachers, managed, questioned, evaluated.

     Second, online training can cause social isolation, because school is not only a place to learn but also a place where they come to socialize, make new friends and learn more communication experiences.

      Third, this form creates an unevenness among localities. For children who have full learning equipment, have a sense of self-study and good family management, it works. Those children with difficult and unmanaged conditions will learn to cope. 

     While the benefits of learning online are obvious, it's important to remember that not all courses can be taught online. Therefore, online training should be seen as a complementary and extensible approach to classical forms of learning.

24 tháng 2 2021

I half agree with this opinion. Why? 

Schools have considered the second house where the children can study, play and join the extracurricular activities. In the school, the student can learn all the subject to expand their knowledge, do the exams... and specially, they can play with their friends. But sometime, study too much make they feel stress, yeah, I know this

Study on Internet has some advantages: they can learn by the photos, stories, songs... and they can stop when they want. But, it has many disadvantage. The children are too young to choose the information on Internet, which need to know or needn't. The Internet has many temptation like: games,  cartoons... make they can't forcus on study if their parents won't  monitoring them, use to much or to long time the electronic device can make their eyes have many problems.

With many reasons, the Internet just help 40 percents the children on study. I think schools have many advantage than study on Internet

7 tháng 5 2021

I will talk about my story, I met and made a wonderful friend before when I was in 6th grade. She was very pretty, did well in math and resembled me in every way. We used to have a lot of good memories together. But after one year of school, she moved to HCM city. I later looked at her profile, I saw a lot of beautiful pictures posted between us. No matter how far apart, we still contact each other and hang out together in the summer colors ... now she has gone abroad to study, but I still hope one day she will come find me .

7 tháng 5 2021

Hello everyone, everyone must have had an interesting and memorable adventure in life. Me too, today I will tell you about an exciting adventure of mine. That day was Sunday, my family and I went to visit Bai Dinh pagoda - Ninh Binh. We got in the car at 3:30 a.m. and arrived around 6 o'clock. First we went to visit the temple, I learned that this place, more than 1000 years ago, was the temporary capital of the Dinh during the construction of Hoa Lu capital and then acted as one of The "four towns" of Hoa Lu capital. Also here, under the Ly dynasty, National Master Nguyen Minh Khong built a monkhood, used to cure diseases to save people, especially the cure for the cure of tigers for King Ly Than Tong. is one of the centers of Buddhism (worshiping Buddha), religion (worshiping Cao Son), worshiping Mother (mother Lieu Hanh). After that, my family and I went into the caves, of course we got a lot of good memories. After visiting the pagoda, we went to visit Trang An river and saw in the bottom of the small boat, the scene was very romantic. The feeling of being in nature, listening to wild birds, not having to worry about work or study, is so enjoyable. Going deep will have to paddle through shimmering stalactites caves, with many different shapes. Until about 5 pm, we returned home. This tour will leave me a lot of joy and happiness. I will never forget it. 

19 tháng 2 2021

Dear my friend!

As you know that since the outbreak of Covid, we have suffered great consequences and many people have suffered losses to their lives and many other things !! In my country, the influence of Covid-19 is not at all light, when I translated Covid to my city, I was very worried and impatient. The government has told and advised people not to go out, and wear masks ... Then then we started to be more careful when going out, to wear masks, That made me very is annoying because it was not very comfortable and can be said that it messed up my life and everyone in the country, and I had to learn through Zoom, after all that time I found it ineffective because studying on Zoom makes me not very focused and makes the lesson difficult to understand for me, what I tell you is true and if possible I want to advise everyone to keep health because we still have to fight this epidemic is quite long and everyone should follow all the rules that the government, everyone has set out to repel this epidemic.

  I hope I will speak with you soon  !!

Dear my friend!

Surely you also know about the Covid 19 epidemic and its heavy effects, right? To be honest, in Vietnam, we are not affected much by the pandemic, but we are also aware of its danger, so we take precautions by wearing masks and hand washing antiseptic. But recently, in Hai Duong, there were cases of infection in the community, and gradually, more and more cases of infections appeared, and more and more people were F1, F2 (people in contact with Covid 19 infected people.) more. Not only that, the epidemic broke out on the occasion of the Lunar New Year, so we must be more conscious of preventing the spread of epidemic. Students must study online, workers struggle on difficult days, and doctors work day and night to fight the epidemic. Even so, there are still some people who are unconscious and take advantage of it to do bad things. Bad deeds deserve condemnation and good deeds deserve praise. So, let's join hands together to repel translation, so that our life can return to normal as before ! Let's fight off a terrifying plague together !

Hope we will have a chance to talk longer! See you again !

1 tháng 3 2021

There are complaints that bad news overwhelms our television. Some people think that television news should be a mixture of good and bad news. I absolutely support the idea.

 

First of all, it is understandable that the majority of television news being reported is bad news, such as: wars, famines, accidents and crime. There is a saying: Joy is easy to forget and sadness is easy to remember. The bad news often disturbs us and makes us curious. The more views from the audience, the more profitable the media organizations are.

 

However, in terms of psychological and medical concerns, if people are frequently exposed to bad news, they will also be affected mentally, gradually they become over-anxious and suspicious. A more dangerous thing is a lack of faith in life. If so, it is getting more and more difficult for us to see good things than to see bad things.

 

While it is true that most of our media used to be bad news, it is undeniable that the attractiveness of many significant news programs like Loving Leaves (Cặp lá yêu thương - a volunteer program on VTV); news about anti-epidemic doctors who work day and night to protect societal health; ...

 

Sum up, I believe that in order to have a rich and meaningful life, we need to have a multi-dimensional perspective. Good news and bad news are both pieces of life and need to be harmonized in the media to bring an authentic, objective and appropriate view to audience.

 

28 tháng 2 2021

It is thought by some people that there should be a mixture of good and bad news on television. Personally, I completely agree with this view.

 

The majority of television news being reported is bad news: wars, famines, accidents, and crime. It is obvious that bad news, by its nature, is appealing to people. Their attention can be achieved by broadcasting negative news. People want to know more about wars and criminal behaviors as opposed to peace and good deeds in their community.

 

However, it is undeniable that bad news have negative impact on people's lives. If the media publishes too much bad news, people will be left feeling hopeless and anxious. They can be stressed and under pressure after reading such type of news. 

 

Thus, the news should report the good happening in the world alongside the bad. Good news such as stories about someone’s achievements, successful personalities, and positive contributions can encourage others to work hard. Some programs about building shelters for the homeless, donating clothes for the poor and so on, these should be shown on TV as well. 

 

In brief, if the media establishes the balance between both types of news, the society will be harmonious and peaceful. This will prevent anxiety and insecurity among the viewers.

Chữa Writing [11/3/2021]Xin chào tất cả các em! Rất vui khi được gặp các em trong bài viết chữa Writing tiếp theo trên hoc24.vn.Vừa qua, các em đã có thời gian 2 ngày để thử sức mình với 1 đề viết về chủ đề Life skills – Kĩ năng sống. Sau bài chữa vừa rồi, cô thấy 1 số bạn đã nắm được cách viết 1 bài văn tiếng Anh học thuật như thế nào, tuy nhiên vẫn còn một số bạn vẫn chưa nắm...
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Xin chào tất cả các em! Rất vui khi được gặp các em trong bài viết chữa Writing tiếp theo trên hoc24.vn.

Vừa qua, các em đã có thời gian 2 ngày để thử sức mình với 1 đề viết về chủ đề Life skills – Kĩ năng sống. Sau bài chữa vừa rồi, cô thấy 1 số bạn đã nắm được cách viết 1 bài văn tiếng Anh học thuật như thế nào, tuy nhiên vẫn còn một số bạn vẫn chưa nắm được cách xử lý 1 đề bài viết essay như thế nào. Đề bài ngày hôm nay tiếp tục đưa ra với dạng đề Agree/Disagree, 1 lần nữa để giúp các em luyện tập và ghi nhớ sâu hơn các bước làm để viết được 1 bài văn học thuật. Bây giờ chúng ta cùng xem xem với đề bài này, chúng ta có thể triển khai nó như thế nào nhé!

Đề bài này về cơ bản không quá khó so với đề trước, bởi vì đề bài nó đưa ra 1 vấn đề rất gần gũi với các em hàng ngày, đó là về tầm quan trọng của việc học kĩ năng sống.

Bài viết hôm nay, cô sẽ cùng các em phân tích 1 bài mẫu để các em hiểu hướng đi, cách làm bài và cách mà tác giả sử dụng ngôn ngữ để diễn tả ý kiến và bảo vệ quan điểm của mình nhé!

 

Question: In your English class you have been talking about life skills: skills which are needed in everyday life. Now your teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Life skills should be taught to teenagers at school together with traditional subjects like maths and science. Do you agree?

 

Các em cùng theo dõi bài mẫu sau nhé!

 

Nowadays, some schools are teaching life skills as well as traditional subjects. Some people say this prepares students better for life in the real world, whereas others say it is not necessary.

 

In my opinion, schools should prepare students for adult life. Financial skills such as budget planning and saving money are essential to avoid debt. It would also be a good idea to learn basic cooking, as this is fundamental for survival when you are living on your own.

 

On the other hand, some people argue that there is no time for extra subjects at school and that life skills should be learnt at home. Personally, I think we already learn many life skills in doing traditional subjects. For example, we learn teamworking by doing group projects, and organising our homework teaches us time management skills.

 

To sum up, I believe all schools should teach life skills. It would not require too much extra work because there is no need to teach them separately from conventional subjects. This will make use that students leave school better prepared for university and work.

 

Chúng ta bắt đầu phân tích từng đoạn nhé!

Introduction

Nowadays, some schools are teaching life skills as well as traditional subjects. Some people say this prepares students better for life in the real world, whereas others say it is not necessary. From my point of view, I agree to some certain extents that schools should integrate teaching life skills with traditional subjects.

 

Ở phần mở bài này tác giả đã viết ra rõ 2 phần của 1 mở bài hoàn chỉnh: dẫn nhậpnêu quan điểm.

 

[Dẫn nhập] Nowadays, some schools are teaching life skills as well as traditional subjects. Some people say this prepares students better for life in the real world, whereas others say it is not necessary.

 

Ở đây tác giả đã viết lại phần đề bài để làm câu dẫn vào chủ đề của bài viết, nhưng sử dụng vốn từ riêng của mình (paraphrase) làm câu dẫn dắt, sau đó tác giả đã đưa ra 2 ý kiến trái chiều nhau: 1 số người đồng ý và 1 số người không đồng ý.

 

[Nêu quan điểm]: From my point of view, I agree that schools should integrate teaching life skills with traditional subjects.

 

Các em để ý thấy có cụm from my point of view, đây là dấu hiệu để cho người đọc biết tác giả bắt đầu đi vào nêu quan điểm của mình. Các em lưu ý rằng mình chỉ nói quan điểm chung nhất: đồng ý hay không đồng ý thôi nhé!

Body Paragraph 1

In my opinion, schools should prepare students for adult life. Financial skills such as budget planning and saving money are essential to avoid debt. It would also be a good idea to learn basic cooking, as this is fundamental for survival when you are living on your own.

 

Trong đoạn Body 1 này, tác giả đã nói rằng là trường học nên trang bị cho học sinh/sinh viên để chuẩn bị bước bào cuộc sống như người lớn. Ở đây tác giả đã support cho các luận điểm của mình bằng các ví dụ về các kĩ năng mà các em cần có khi sống tự lập như người lớn. Các em có thể sử dụng các quan điểm khác để chứng minh cho nó, có thể sử dụng quan hệ nguyên nhân – kết quả, nêu ví dụ, trải nghiệm của bản than mình… để chứng minh cho luận điểm đó.

Body Paragraph 2

On the other hand, some people argue that there is no time for extra subjects at school and that life skills should be learnt at home. Personally, I think we already learn many life skills in doing traditional subjects. For example, we learn teamworking by doing group projects, and organising our homework teaches us time management skills.

 

Khi chuyển sang Body 2, tác giả đã sử dụng 1 cụm từ dẫn đó là on the other hand (mặt khác), các cụm từ như vậy cô gọi đó là các cụm chuyển (Transitional words). Và trong 1 bài essay, rất cần thiết khi các em sử dụng các cụm như vậy vì nó sẽ giúp bài văn của các em trở nên mạch lạc hơn, rõ ràng và tăng được điểm Coherence and Cohesion nhé! Về cách triển khai ý, các em làm tương tự Body 1.

Conclusion

To sum up, I believe all schools should teach life skills. It would not require too much extra work because there is no need to teach them separately from conventional subjects. This will make use that students leave school better prepared for university and work.

 

Ở trong phần kết bài, các em có thể thấy tác giả lại bắt đầu phần kết bài của mình bằng cụm To sum up (để tóm lược lại). Trong phần kết bài các em thấy câu đầu tiên, tác giả đã 1 lần nữa khẳng định lại ý kiến của mình về quan điểm được đề bài đưa ra. Sau đó, các em thấy các câu còn lại, tác giả đã tóm lược lại các ý chính mà người viết đã nêu ra ở phần Body. Và câu cuối cùng, tác giả đã mở rộng và rẽ ý tưởng sang 1 hướng khác, đây có thể gọi là 1 kết bài mở rộng. Và khi đi thi thì chúng ta nên viết theo kiểu kết bài này nhé!

Cô có 1 số tips để giúp các em có thể viết tốt hơn trong các bài essays:

1. Tổ chức bài văn của mình theo các đoạn với 1 phần mở bài, 1 phần kết bài và các đoạn thân bài ở giữa. Hãy sử dụng các cụm từ như Nowadays hoặc To sum up (= In conclusion, To conclude, All in all…) để bắt đầu đoạn đầu tiên và đoạn cuối cùng của bài.

2. Hãy nghĩ về cách các em tổ chức các đoạn thân bài. Bài văn này có 2 đoạn văn, trao đổi về 2 quan điểm đồng ý (for) và không đồng ý (against) chủ đề.

3. Em hãy sử dụng đa dạng về ngôn ngữ để diễn tả sự chuyển tiếp giữa các đoạn (transitional words), quan hệ đối lập, so sánh (compare and contrast) và đưa ra ví dụ (for example, for instance, such as…)

Ví dụ như trong bài, các em thấy sẽ có những cụm từ như whereas, such as, On the other hand, For example.

4. Sử dụng các cụm từ như Personally, In my opinion, From my point of view… để đưa ra, nhấn mạnh quan điểm của bản thân.

5. Sử dụng các cụm như Some people say…Others say… để thể hiện các quan điểm đối lập nhau.

6. Hạn chế sự lặp lại (repetition). Đây là 1 cách để giúp các em tăng điểm từ vựng của mình lên bằng việc các em sẽ sử dụng các từ đồng nghĩa (synonyms). Ví dụ như trong bài cô có từ necessary, các em có thể tìm thấy trong bài các từ cũng có ý nghĩa tương tự như vậy như essential, fundamental. Tuy nhiên, việc sử dụng từ đồng nghĩa phải phù hợp với ngữ cảnh (context) của bài. Để có thể tra các từ đồng nghĩa, cô có 1 gợi ý cho các em về việc sử dụng từ điển, các em tham khảo đường link phía dưới:

 

<https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english-thesaurus>.

 

Nếu có vấn đề thắc mắc trong quá trình làm bài, em có thể để lại bình luận hoặc nhắn trực tiếp cho cô để được hổ trợ nhé! Chúc các em học tốt và có những trải nghiệm tuyệt vời tại hoc24.vn!

 

Link chữa bài viết ngày 25/02: <https://hoc24.vn/cau-hoi/chua-writing-2522021xin-chao-tat-ca-cac-em-rat-vui-khi-duoc-gap-cac-em-trong-bai-viet-dau-tien-cua-chuyen-muc-chua-writing-tren-hoc24vnvua-qua.367700454464.>.

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12 tháng 3 2021

Cô ơi, em có ý kiến về bài văn tham khảo ạ

Theo em trong mở bài  phải nên ra quan điểm của mình, agree or disagree. Em nghĩ nên ghi thêm 1 câu như là "personally, i agree with group 1/2)

Còn 2 đoạn body đều nêu agree thì sao lại dùng liên từ nối là on the other hand ạ?