Write a passage of 120 -150 words about: There are many leisure activities on average
day. Nowadays both children and adult enjoy playing computer games. What do you think
about playing video games ? Good or not good ? Why?
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* Introduction: Nowadays both children and adult enjoy play computer games. As for me/ I think / From my point of view, playing computer games has both pros and cons.
* Advantages :
+ Entertainment : After a hard working day or some stressful lessons, playing computer games help us relax.
+ Having more knowledge about computer.
+ There are various types of educational computer games which help them in learning some subjects.
+ Develop some different skills for them
* Disadvantages:
+ Playing computer games too much make us addicted and passive
+ It wastes of time
+ Playing computer games too much is bad for their health . There will be some diseases such as short- sighted, headache, backache,....
+ Some games contain violence or crime. Thus, the evil influence of computer games on young generation is inevitable.
* Sum up: All things are considered, everything has two sides: advantages and disadvantages. Computer games will be useful for us only if we know how to spend time on it sensibly.
Computer games are very fun and interesting.But in my opinion,computer games also has many disadvantages.
Firstly,it wastes of our time.We often have to spend much time playing it in order to win games.Moreover,Playing computer games is addictive.It is not good for everybody.
Secondly,Playing computer games too much is not good for our eyes,our healthy.We can be nearsighted by computer use for a long time and are obese due to sitting a long time.
Thirdly,playing games too much can make academic achievement drop
Therefore,I think computer games are not good.In my opinion,students should take part in sports or energy activities,such as: basketball,volleyball,football,badminton,...They are very fun and energetic.Moreover,they can help us lose weight and increase height.Playing games are so fun but should not be too much and should be reasonable
Read the following passage. Find the mistake, underline the mistakes and write the correct words .
Children love to playing =>playing computer games. Some people say that many of them are addicted to games. If you become addicting => addicted , all you can think about is computer games and you cannot spend a day without playing. Of course, playing games on the computer is the great =>greatest way to spending =>spend time and have fun. But there are also bad sides to it as well.
Children love to playing=>play computer games. Some people say that many of them are addicted=>addictive to games. If u become addicting, all u can think about is computer games and u cannot spend a day without playing. Of course, playing games on the computer is a great way to spending=>to spend time and have fun. But there are also bad sides to it as well.
Children love to play computer games. Some people say that many of them are addicted to games. If you become addicting ( addicted ), all you can think about is computer games and you cannot spend a day without playing. Of course, playing games on the computer is the great ( greatest ) way to spending ( spend ) time and have fun. But there are also bad sides to it as well.
First of all, you do not get enough exercise because you do not have to move your body much when play games. Second, your eyesight becomes badly because your eyes are fixed on the computer screen for to long. This is why not ( bỏ ) it is not hard to find children wearing glasses around theses days. Third you do not get to spend much time with your family because ( ?? ) are spending all time of your time ( all your time ) in front of the computer.
Playing computer games is not such as bad thing. But too much playing ( có thể bỏ ) can cause problems. How much ( many ) hours do you spend in front of the computer? Why not take this opportunity to cut down on the computer games?
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Read the following passage. Find the five mistakes, underline the mistakes and write the correct words.
Children love to play => PLAYING computer games. Some people say that many of them are addicted to games. If you become addicting => ADDICTIVE , all you can think about is computer games and you cannot spend a day without playing. Of course, playing games on the computer is the great way to spending => SPEND time and have fun. But there are also bad sides to it as well.
First of all, you do not get enough exercise because you do not have to move your body much when play games. Second, your eyesight becomes badly because your eyes are fixed on the computer screen for to long. This is why not => BỎ NOT it is not hard to find children wearing glasses around theses days. Third you do not get to spend much time with your family because are => OF spending all time of your time in front of the computer.
Playing computer games is not such as bad thing. But too much playing can cause problems. How much hours do you spend in front of the computer? Why not take this opportunity to cut down on the computer games?
Tham khảo:
Nowadays, children tend to spend more time on computer. Many of them play computer almost every day. Nobody can deny the valuable benefits of computers. However, everything has its limit. Personally, I think it is more negative than positive. \n\n\nWhen kids spend time sitting in front of the screen every day, they put their health at risk. Staring at screen every day severely damages their eyes. Besides, the fact that sitting for too long and health problems fatigue, diabetes, heart disease, musculoskeletal pain are closely linked is proved by scientists. As a result, spending so much time using computers, children nowadays are not as strong and active as their parents in the past. \n\n\nUsing computer every day prevents children from enjoying their childhood. Children who use computers so much certainly have less time playing and interact with others around them. These children have little chance of having many close friends, which makes their lives so boring. It also contributes to their shyness, selfishness, insensitivity and lack of social skills. They are just interested in their computer and spend little time trying to understand people and exploring the world around them. Thus, their emotion is poor. They are not able to experience all the wonderful feelings and beautiful things they deserve to have.\n\n\nUsing computer every day means little time left for children to learn. Focusing too much on computer has bad influence on children’s academic reputation because it takes up children’s time for revising lessons and doing homework. It is terrible as studying is important for children. In addition, children who use computer every day do not have much time to learn from other people, reality. Therefore, they lack certain skills for everyday life.\n\n\nIn conclusion, using computer everydays does children more harm than good. So instead of letting children using computer every day parents should encourage them to take part in other activities and hanging out with friend.