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the next vacation I'm giong to Da Lat with my family. Da Lat is called the land of fog. the tour will last 2 days. Our 2 day vacation plan are: the frist day, i'll be giong for a walk around the hotel that i rented. i and my sister will be eating the food we like. i and my family will walk along the path to enjoy the scent of pine, glass and flower. we will be going to the super market buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenir or going shopping and many other interesting activities. early in the moring on the last day of vacation, we will be going to the Poungour waterfall. water falls from a height of nearly 40 meters, spread over 100 meters, throght a 7-storey stone stair system. surrounded by a primeval forest with an area of about 2.5 ha with rich and diverse vegetation. the average temparature is from 14 to 23 degree celsius. in the evening we'll be visiting our relative. we'll be be back tomorrow morning. i'm excited about the up coming vacation, hopefully the vacation will be as i excited.
The next vacation I'm going to with my family is in Da Lat. Da Lat is called the land of fog, this tour last 2 days. I have planned what will we do in our 2-day vacation. On the first day, I'm going to go for a walk around the hotel that I rented, after that, me and my sister are going to eat food that we . Me and my family will walk along the path to enjoy the scent of pine, glass and flower. We will go to the supermarket to buy some special food, tea, coffee, souvenirs or go shoping and many other interesting activities. Early in the morning on the last day of our vacation, we are going to the Poungour waterfall. The water falls from the height about 40 meters, spread over 100 meters, through a 7 storey stone stair system surrounded by a primeval forest with an area of about 2.5 ha with rich and diverse vegetation. The average temparature in Da Lat is from 14 to 23 degrees celsius. In the evening, we'll visit our relative and we'll leave in the morning of the following day. I'm very excited about the up coming vacation. I hope the vacation will be as I expected. ( Bạn nên chú ý về thì tương lai, bạn viết là Will + be + V_ing nhưng thực ra là Will + V_Infinitive hoặc Be ( are, is, am ) + going to do smt )