This is the schedule for my one-day visit to Moscow. On the first day we arrive at Moscow Vnukovo Airport at 7.30 A.M and take a ride to a hotel nearby. Then, we go to Kremli - the historical and geographical center of Moscow. It has been recognized by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage. Next, we go to Red Square. It is near Kremli and is the most popular square in Moscow. Then, we go to GUM department store to buy many things. At about 12 A.M, we go to Tiberio Restaurant. After lunch, we return the hotel and go to sleep. At about 2 P.M, we wake up and go to Moscow River to go for a walk along the river or enjoying a boat tour. Enjoying on the river, you also see the beautiful scenery. At about 7 P.M, we have dinner in Old City Restaurant. After dinner, we return the hotel and arrange our luggage for to go home.
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This is the schedule for my one-day visit to Moscow. On the first day we arrive at Moscow Vnukovo Airport at 7.30 A.M and take a ride to a hotel nearby. Then, we go to Kremli - the historical and geographical center of Moscow. It has been recognized by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage. Next, we go to Red Square. It is near Kremli and is the most popular square in Moscow. Then, we go to GUM department store to buy many things. At about 12 A.M, we go to Tiberio Restaurant. After lunch, we return the hotel and go to sleep. At about 2 P.M, we wake up and go to Moscow River to go for a walk along the river or enjoying a boat tour. Enjoying on the river, you also see the beautiful scenery. At about 7 P.M, we have dinner in Old City Restaurant. After dinner, we return the hotel and arrange our luggage for to go home.
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- '' It is near Kremli and is the most popular square in Moscow. '' => It is near Kremli and it's / it is the most popular square in Moscow
- '' After lunch, we return the hotel and go to sleep. '' => After luch, we return / turn back to the hotel and go to sleep.
- '' At about 2 P.M, we wake up and go to Moscow River to go for a walk along the river or enjoying a boat tour. '' => At about 2 P.M, we wake up and go to Moscow River to go for a walk or enjoy...
- '' Enjoying on the river, you also see the beautiful scenery. '' => Theo mình thì bạn nên thay đổi sang trạng ngữ khác cho câu đỡ bị cứng. Mình nghĩ cũng nên đổi '' scenery '' thành '' sights '' hoặc '' scenes '', chuyển câu thành '' you also see many beautiful scenes / sights ''
- '' After dinner, we return the hotel and arrange our luggage for to go home. '' => Theo mình bạn nên bỏ '' for '' đi