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Today I will talk about the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city
In the city, people go from place to place very quickly by motorbike, by bus or by taxi. Housewives can buy everything they need in shops and supermarkets everywhere. Children study at the schools near their houses. For entertainment, city people can go to theatres and amusement centres. Urban workers always earn more money than the labourers do in the countryside.
However, the pollution of air, water and noise in the city badly affects people’s health. Traffic accident and social evils, which are popular in the city, also threaten people’s safety and happiness
That all. Thank you for your listening.
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