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[Đặng Nguyễn Hà Vy]

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_{Hello, I'm Vy. Today I'm gonna introduce you guys my future house. My dream house would have technology all around it. It will be on an island and large. In front of my house, there will be a big black gate, a water fountain, and a greensward. To the left of my house, there’ll be a beautiful flower garden, a garage, some tall trees, an amphibious car, and a swimming pool too. On the top of the house, there will be a time machine. My house will have 2 floors and 10 rooms: a living room, a library, three bedrooms, a kitchen, 2 bathrooms, a dining room, and a cinema. In the living room, there will be a big smart wireless TV for order food, entertainment, and control robots. There is also a table, some sofas, some ornamental plants, and some pictures, etc. In the library, there will be robots that take the book I want. In each bedroom, there will be a very big bed, a wardrobe, an air conditioner, and a big smart TV too. I would have a wall that would be all glass. That wall would look over the ocean. The wall would have high tech so it could talk to me and set the alarm. The talking wall could talk to me and it’ll help me do a lot of things. The basement would have a glass security door on it. The glass would be bulletproof and the other glass window and walls would bulletproof too. The house would be missile proof and every single door would have a security lock on it and you would have to say a voice recognition. In the wardrobe, I will have clothes that can adjust my body temperature. In the kitchen, there will be a dishwasher, some cupboards, and some robots will help me cook meals. In each bathroom, there will be a smart mirror that I can control it by my voice.}

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Answer 1

[Grayz Melonz]

mình sửa rồi đó bn chi cần so lại là xg.

Hello, I'm Vy. Today I'm gonna introduce you guys to my future house. My dream house would have technology all around it. It will be on an island and large. In front of my house, there will be a big black gate, a water fountain, and a greensward. To the left of my house, there’ll be a beautiful flower garden, a garage, some tall trees, an amphibious car, and a swimming pool too. On the top of the house, there will be a time machine. My house will have 2 floors and 10 rooms: a living room, a library, three bedrooms, a kitchen, 2 bathrooms, a dining room, and a cinema. There will be a big smart wireless TV for order food, entertainment, and control robots in the living room. There is also a table, some sofas, some ornamental plants, and some pictures, etc. In the library, there will be robots that take the book I want. There will be a very big bed, a wardrobe, an air conditioner, and a big smart TV in each bedroom. I would have a wall that would be all glass. That wall would look over the ocean. The wall would have high tech so it could talk to me and set the alarm. The talking wall could talk to me and it’ll help me do a lot of things. The basement would have a glass security door on it. The glass would be bulletproof and the other glass window and walls would be bulletproof too. The house would be missile proof and every single door would have a security lock on it and you would have to say a voice recognition. In the wardrobe, I will have clothes that can adjust my body temperature. There will be a dishwasher, some cupboards, and some robots that will help me cook meals in the kitchen. In each bathroom, there will be a smart mirror that I can control by my voice.