Question

[Nguyễn Thắng]

ERROR CORRECTION
1. I thought (the) show (would) be very (interesting) and (excited)
2. When I finishied (to write) my project, (everyone) (in) my company (had already) left
3. (it was) an (extremely) (frightened) experience (in) my life
4. the book (whose) i (am reading) is (on) information ( teachnology)
5. my brother stopped (to smoke ) because (it is) very (harmful) (to his health)

WRITING
1/ alothough he had a good salary, he was unhappy in his life
- in spite of
2. they are expecting to meet their son
- they are looking forward
3. why don't we have some soup for lunch
- i suggest
4. i often go swimming in the morning when i lived in HCM city
- i used
5. my mother has watered some trees recently
- some trees
6. they went out although it rained heavily
- despite
7. i like study Maths because i am good at numbers
- i am interested
8. remember to lock the door before going to bed
- don't forget
9. mike was interested in watching cartoon when he was a child
- mike used
10. i often took a trip to the forest when i lived in new york
- i used
11. no one in my family has used this washing machine
- this washing machine
12/ she has just given me some cupcakes
- i have
13. you shouldn't eat too much meat
- you'd better
14. i advise you to wear a coat when you go out
- you had better

Answer 1

[Komorebi]

ERROR CORRECTION
1. I thought the show would be very interesting and exciting
2. When I finished writing my project, everyone in my company had already left
3. It was an extremely frightening experience in my life
4. the book (whose) i (am reading) is (on) information ( teachnology)
5. My brother stopped smoking because it is very harmful to his health

WRITING
1. Although he had a good salary, he was unhappy in his life
-> In spite of his good salary , he was unhappy in his life
2. They are expecting to meet their son
-> They are looking forward to meeting their son
3. Why don't we have some soup for lunch
-> I suggest some soup for our lunch
4. I often go swimming in the morning when i lived in HCM city
-> I used to go swimming in the morning when I lived in HCM city
5. My mother has watered some trees recently
-> Some trees have been watered by my mother recently
6. They went out although it rained heavily
-> Despite raining heavily , they went out
7. I like study Maths because i am good at numbers
-> I am interested in studying Maths because i am good at numbers
8. Remember to lock the door before going to bed
-> Don't forget to lock the door before going to bed
9. Mike was interested in watching cartoon when he was a child
-> Mike used to be interested in watching cartoon when he was a child
10. I often took a trip to the forest when i lived in new york
-> I used to take a trip to the forest when I lived in New York
11. No one in my family has used this washing machine
-> This washing machine has not been used by no one in my family
12. She has just given me some cupcakes
-> I have just been given some cupcakes by her
13. You shouldn't eat too much meat
-> You'd better eat less meat
14. I advise you to wear a coat when you go out
-> You had better wear a coat when you go out

Answer 2

[Nguyễn Thắng]

mấy từ trong ngoặc là mấy từ in đậm nhưng nếu em in đậm thì sợ bác k biết từ nào :V nên e đóng ngoặc, từ nào sai bác tô đậm ngoạc dùm em đc k