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Nowadays, increasing many people use facebook , a popular social networking. Facebook brings in many great advantages to the youths, the adults as well as the business men. First of all, Facebook is a website which allows us to communicate easily. It provides several features such as chatting, personal messaging and photo sharing, which enables us to share information with other facebookers conveniently. We can send pictures, videos and even some sweet greetings for someone we like. Besides, we can re-connect with old friends or someone who we have lost touch with for a long time. With the search function of facebook, we can rapidly search for by entering the key words such as his/her name or address. That's change a lot. In addition,people can use facebook as an efficient place to advertise their products. We can only sit in the front of the computer, upload the advertisement and then enter share putton .In a few minutes,this advertisement will spread worldwide like wildfire. Thus we can save money instead of advertising it on the mass media. To sum up, facebook is a popular and useful website for everyone to communicate,re-connect with old or lost friends and promote the businesses.
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There is no denying that computer is one of the all-time greatest inventions of human being. It has brought us an endless number of benefits. This miraculous tool not only allows us to edit documents, to create excel worksheets or to install programs to serve our needs but also helps our kids relax with a wide range of games and apps. However, some people believe that computers may bring more harm than benefits if children use them daily; meanwhile, others state that they are helpful and can affect children positively. In my opinion, I totally agree with the first idea because of the following reasons.\nTo begin with, children will be isolated from other people around them if they use computers frequently. It’s simply because they spend most of their time on utilizing computers, so they do not have much communication with their parents. Moreover, when computers become their close friend, they may refuse to play with other kids as well as to take part in outdoor activities. It means there is less interaction between them and their fellows. Obviously, this is not recommended for children since they need to be active and to learn new things from family and friends to broaden their horizon. \nAnother point is that using computers uncontrollably may cause children to develop some diseases. Sitting in front of the computer regularly may lead to obesity because every day, children absorb a large amount of nutrition such as fat, protein and starch but they do not take exercises to consume this energy. Seriously, obesity can put them at higher risk of developing diabetes. Besides, some research has shown that looking at the computer screen continuously with concentration more than 2 hours will reduce our vision and cause myopia easily.\nThe last reason is that children can neglect their study and sink into computer games. It goes without saying that computer games are so addictive. If kids are unable to control themselves, they may spend all their time on playing games. After completing a level, they will have promotion to continue to play and to unlock new levels, then all these things will be repeated over and over again. In addition, computer games can inhibit the ability of thinking of children because they do not need to rack their brains a lot when playing games. Consequently, their study results may become worse and this will affect their future significantly.\nIn conclusion, I am totally in agreement with the idea that using computers daily will put great negative impacts on children. However, they can still take advantages of this wonderful invention if they use it suitably and effectively. Therefore, parents should teach their kids to be self-disciplined and to manage their time well when using computers.
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Villages are a beauty and today's generation is really missing the beauty of villages. Villages are so silent and calm and pollution free. Though I live in a city with the maddening crowd and sound, my parents used to live in villages and I have been there many times.Both my parents come from villages, and I look forward to go their places during my vacations. It is so calm and peaceful and the beauty of nature is just fantastic. With not many families around, they know each other so well, that they all almost live like a large family. You could step into your neighbor’s house at any time and you would be welcomed with yummy dishes and snacks. Though the transportation has advanced, there are still places where you need to walk.I remember, while visiting my grandmother’s place, we had to walk through the paddy fields to reach her home!! It was such an experience that I guess very few, who are of my age would have had The backwaters are another beauty to the villages. You have small streams that club to the lakes and backwaters. This stream water is so fresh and crystal clear. You could walk through them and the cool water just rushes over your feet and makes you feel so cool. Hours could be spent by simply sitting and admiring the beauty of nature.The sunset is a beautiful scene to be viewed.
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Bài của em về nội dung hợp lý, sử dụng nhiều từ vựng hay. Nhưng có một điểm em cần lưu ý đó là từ "villages". Khi em dùng dạng thức số nhiều của từ này thì em phải chú ý đến việc chia động từ to be ở đằng sau nhé (câu đầu tiên).
Tiếp theo ở dòng số 4 có cụm "my parents come from villages". Có 2 lỗi sai ở câu này. Đầu tiên, đó vẫn là từ "villages". Bố mẹ tôi cũng đều xuất thân từ làng quê thì village phải có "the" vì đó đã xác định rồi. Thứ hai đó là em đã chia sai thì của động từ "come" rồi, câu này đang nói về sự việc xảy ra trong quá khứ nên phải dùng là "came". Câu của em có thể sửa lại là "My parents came from the village/countryside"
Cũng ở dòng đó và có cụm "look forward to come their place", thiếu giới từ "to" em nhé!
Dòng số 12 có câu em dùng "streams" và câu sau em lại dùng là "this stream", em nên dùng đồng nhất dạng thức của từ nhé. Có thể em dùng ở câu trước là "a stream" thì câu sau em có thể dùng this stream. Hoặc là nếu câu trước em để streams thì câu sau em nên để "these streams" và chia động từ to be thành "are" nhé!
Anyway, ý tưởng của em tốt, từ vựng tốt. Goodluck!
Fresh water is the most important source of life on the earth. Any living thing may survive without food for days however it is impossible to imagine life without water and oxygen. The ever increasing human population enhances the demand of more water for purposes like drinking, washing, performing industrial processes, irrigating crops, arranging swimming pools and other water-sports centres. Water pollution is done by the people of all over the world because of increasing demands and competitions of luxuries life. Waste products from many human activities are spoiling the whole water and decreasing the amount of oxygen available in the water. Such pollutants are altering the physical, chemical, thermal, and biological characteristics of the water and adversely affecting the lives inside as well as outside the water.
When we drink the polluted water, harmful chemicals and other pollutants goes inside our body and deteriorates all the body organs functioning and puts our lives in danger. Such harmful chemicals also disturb the lives of animals and plants greatly. When plants absorb dirty water through their roots, they stop growing and die. Thousands of seabirds are killing because of the oil spilling from ships and industries. High level of water pollution is done due to the chemicals coming out of the agricultural usage of fertilizers, insecticides and pesticides. The effect of water pollution varies from place to place upon the type and amount of water contamination. The degradation of drinking water needs an urgent basis prevention method which is possible by the proper understanding and support from the end of each and every person living on the earth.
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I consider the earth quake in 2011 was the most horrible and frightful in my life. A magnitude 5.5 earthquake centered off southern Vietnam in November 2001, killed one person after a plank loosened by the shaking fell on his head. Many houses were damaged, and several people were injured as they tried to escape from their homes, including some who jumped from balconies.Luckily, none of deaths. Some schools and office buildings damaged by the quake were closed for inspection. Dien Bien Phu was the site of a key victory by Vietnamese forces against French colonialist forces in 1954. After the quake, many residents of the town stayed on the streets all night and did not dare to go back into their houses until morning,People in the whole town could not sleep for fear of another quake. Earthquakes occur infrequently in VietnamThe quake was the worst to hit Vietnam in a decade. Damage from Vietnam earthquake estimated at $13 million.
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Internet is necessary for you because of these reason:
firstly, You can read newspaper online or download lots of information from the web pages. Beside, you can learns online as well. Second, It helps you study faster by a lot of answer in the internet. You can also relax by a lot of website such as Zing Me or Facebook for you to share your ideas and information with your friends. You can watch movies or listen to music if you like. It's help you relax after all day work hard.In fact, there are a lot of advantages of using the internet.
I agree with the idea that with the help of technology, students will benefit greatly from studying by themselves at home. Firstly, we will study by ourselves, it’s easy to get your own knowledge. Furthermore, we won’t go to school because we can study at home, it also saves time. For these reasons, studying on the Internet is important to improve our knowledge
Living in the countryside has a lot of advantages, but also many disadvantages. As the advantage we can consider the fact that the country is less polluted and the traffic isn't so heavy. You are fit and you don't need to worry about your health condition, because in the countryside the air and water are so clean. In the country there are many plant species. There aren't any huge blocks of flats, modern skyscrapers or bothersome traffic jams. In the country you are free to admire the breathtaking landscapes such as huge meadows, peaceful hills or forests. You can enjoy walking in the forest and picking mushrooms or hunting. Another advantage is that you may easily build a big house and the garden, because charges for ground are much lower than in the suburbs. Moreover, living in the countryside is cheaper than it is in the city, so you probably may afford many other things, because the prices are lower. What is more, you can invite your friends to the barbecue organized in your garden. It would be great! The other positive side is the safety. In the rural area the crime rate is much lower. There aren't a lot of housebreaks and the possibility of burglary is also lower. In the countryside people usually and keep eyes on neighbour's estates. They always react when something strange is happening. Country life is very peaceful and silent. You will enjoy the feeling of peace.
However, there are a lot of positive aspects of living in the country side, there are also some disadvantages. Living in the country is slower. People don't need to hurry and have a lot of time. People in the country don't have to work so many hours as they do in the city. On the other hand, they don't earn so much money. Moreover, there aren't such interesting things to do during free time. The unemployment rate is also much higher than in the city. The problem may be also the communication. If you don't have your own car, you may have problem how to commute to work. The same problem concerns the access to the hospitals, schools, police stations and shops, which are usually located far from the village. Last of all, there are some dangers connected with country life such as heavy snowfall or rainfall.
To sum up, I think that living in the country may have a lot of advantages such as fresh air, breathtaking landscapes and comfort, but a lot of people decide to stay in the city, due to the fact that the life in the town is easier. The easy access to shops and other institutions are the great advantage.