Question

[Bùi Khánh Huyền]

Mình có một bài văn tả ngôi trường mơ ước , giúp mình với 

Answer 1

[Đinh Nho Hoàng]

 

Dinh Tien Hoang Primary School located on high and wide mound at the top of the village. Remote look back, the school as a great landscape painting with bright colors: dark red tiles, color yellow concept stand out from the green-leaved background. Dinh Tien Hoang Primary School located on high and wide mound at the top of the village. Remote look back, the school as a great landscape painting with bright colors: dark red tiles, color yellow concept stand out from the green-leaved background. Through the large iron gates on to the spacious school grounds cemented smoothness. Before managing board room door, steel flag pole rising. On the top, the red flag flutter flying. Each original eagle, phoenixes are original brick circle around inches tall, painted white. School grounds where students focus on information first flag-raising on Monday of each week, as well as where we exercise to the beat of drums and between the hours of comfortable playing under the tree shade.

 

Three two-storey blocks arranged in a u-shape, facing the school yard. The name of each class are noted on the small plaque mounted in front of the classroom. The rooms, bright neon lights soothe, smooth quiet ceiling fans spin serve us learning. Angle class is a display shelf toys, school supplies by the skillful hands of us make. In the middle of the upper wall are photos of Uncle Ho. Uncle looked at her eyes full of love and affection. Townhouse middle office including managing board, board meeting room, traditional rooms and a library. On the price of solid wood house was built at the top of the Clock drums in school, at recess ... crunchy drum pounding, heart tingle nguoi.Sau garden area school classes with a variety of trees, flowers familiar hometown by hand planting and caring students. in the middle of the garden is a playground with slides, seesaw, swings, swing ... Now the players, we were usually out here playing delight. There are schools such condition is due to the efforts of the people and the interest of the local government. I love the children, the school attached to childhood smoothly. Day after day, under the roof of this school, we are learning, fun, should be teachers who teach.

Answer 2

[nguyễn vũ phượng duy]

Each person has dreams, there are very people and they dream that they become richly, but there are people and they dream that they have good jobs and happy family and my dream is simple.
Now, my country has many children who are living very poor. They have not parent or they have lost parent. All most, they are victims of their bad mother. There are mothers after to give birth, they discard their baby at hospital or everywhere they can. These children are lucky, they are accepted by one, other children are not lucky, and they die because they have not mother milk. 
My dream is there are many good people, they will be working for these children to they have happy houses and happy families.


Each person has dreams, there are very people and they dream that they become richly, but there are people and they dream that they have good jobs and happy family and my dream is simple. (*Your sentence is a bit lengthy*)
@ Rewrite: Different people have different dreams. Some people hope that they will become rich in the future. Others dream of having good jobs and happy families. For me, I also have my own dream which is small and simple but really meaningful not only to me but also to the whole society.

Now, my country has many children who are living very poor in poverty. They don't have parents or they have lost parent their parents passed away. All most In some cases, they are even victims of their bad mothers. There are mothers after to give birth, they who mercilessly (nhẫn tâm) discard their babies at hospital or everywhere they can. These children are Lucky children will be adopted accepted by some kind people. The others children who are not lucky will die because they have not lack of mother's milk. 
My dream is there are many good people, they will be working for these children to they have happy houses and happy families.

I understand your idea in the last sentence, but I think it was badly organized. Therefore, I rewrited it for you. :D

Therefore, I hope that there will be a lot of kind-hearted people who are ready to take care of these pitiable  little kids and give them love and happiness.

Good job!!!! :smilie_clap: 
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