Question

[#Mon]

Hi! I'm .... I'm twelve and I'm study at ..... I live in ... . There are four seasons in a year in Viet Nam. Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter. In the Spring, it's very warm and there are many apricot blossoms in the street. They are very beautiful! I can visit relativies with my family and eat Banh Chung, cake sweets or crack seeds,... Before that, into the New Year's Eve, I can watch the fireworks in the bridge. It very beautiful and coroful ! It's very hot in the summer so I sometimes go to the beach with my family or go swimming with my friends. I usually stay at home because it's very hot. When the weather is cold, I never go out, I just stay at home and listen to music, watch TV about the weather today or read long novel. In four seasons, I like autumn best and in the months, I like most August because it's my birth month. The fall is cool and there are many yellow leafs or red leafs. The landscape is very beautiful! I can go out and go snacking with my friends or play some games in The Hall of Culture.Sometimes I go to small restaurant with my family to happy birthday me. It's very happy!

Mong mn nhận xét ạ!

Answer 1

[La Na Kha]

1.today->that day.

2.novel->novels.

3.Sửa lại câu I like autumn bét and in the months,..

4.leafs->leaves

5.Sửa happy bithday me

Answer 2

[#Mon]

Thanks bn nhìu ~