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one of my favourite sports is soccer. I have played it since i was 7 years old. At that time, when i saw the boys playing football, my heart was excited. I immediately ran home, asked my mother to buy a ball and i asked my father to show me to play At first, i thought soccer was easy but after a few day i found it harder than i though because we need a quick and skillful food. To continue my hobby i have to practice every day I will try to become a soccer player in the future. This is my favourite sport and thank to soccer my stamina is better Bài này mình làm có được ko ạ

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one of my favourite sports is soccer. I have played it since I was 7 years old. At that time, when I saw the boys playing football, my heart was pounding with excitement. I immediately ran home, asked my mother to buy a ball and I asked my father to show me to play At first, I thought soccer was easy but after a few days I found it harder than I thought because we need quick and skillful feet. To continue my hobby I had to practice every day. I will try to become a soccer player in the future. This is my favourite sport and thanks to soccer my stamina is better / improved.

some minor errors, I guess; but a very good piece of writing!