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Vietnam is not only famous for its development but also for its majestic natural wonders. Recognized as one of the seven natural wonders of the world, Ha Long Bay is an amazing tourist attraction in the north of Vietnam, which is located in Quang Ninh province. Ha Long Bay attracts tourists due to its breathtaking views, natural beauties and Geological values.The complex includes 1,969 islands of various sizes, 989 of which have been given names such as Hon Rong (Dragon Islet), Hon Trong Mai (Cock and Hen Islet)…Going there , you can lie on the beach, swim or dive to see the coral reefs and enjoy the fresh air. Remember to buy some special dishes, handicrafts and enjoy local foods. I really love nature and people here, visiting Ha Long is a memorable experience. In the future, I hope Ha Long Bay will develop and become more popular over the world.

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Vietnam is not only famous for its development but also for its majestic natural wonders. Recognized as one of the seven natural wonders of the world, Ha Long Bay is an amazing tourist attraction in the north of Vietnam, which is located in Quang Ninh province. Ha Long Bay attracts tourists due to its breathtaking views, natural beauties->beauty and Geological values.The complex includes 1,969 islands of various sizes, 989 of which have been given names such as Hon Rong (Dragon Islet), Hon Trong Mai (Cock and Hen Islet)…Going there , you can lie on the beach, swim or dive to see the coral reefs and enjoy the fresh air. Remember to buy some special dishes, handicrafts and enjoy local foods. I really love nature and people here, visiting Ha Long is a memorable experience. In the future, I hope Ha Long Bay will develop and become more popular over the world.

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